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February 7
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Why are you always tearing me down?

Why does this world hate me?

I used to smile but you make me frown...

You trap me when I want to be free.

 

You make me afraid to wake up in the morning...

I keep giving and you keep taking,

When I do something good, you take all the glory.

Nowdays when I smile you should know that I'm faking.

 

You make me wonder if there is a better place

You make me wanna start leavin'.

You make me wanna punch you in the face,

You make me wanna stop breathin'.

 

This thing we call livin' isn't all that great,

I want to be free of your tyrany.

It doesn't help that youre full of hate,

Don't you see you're destroying me?

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I write poems when I'm depressed... I'm NOT considering suicide, I just needed some rhymes. My issues aren't that bad...
:iconrosepetal179:
oh this reminds me of how i feel when im with my soon to be ex boyfriend. he treats me like dirt and this poem shows that.
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~Silosson Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well this poem is refering to my classmates and their attitudes toward me.

I hope you figure out what's going on with your (ex)boyfriend, I'm sure you're a great person and deserve better if he is treating you badly

Thanks for commenting
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:iconrosepetal179:
ur welcome. well, i already know what is wrong with my boyfriend!! hes a liar and a person that acts possessive!!
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